My Special Place by Ruby-Jay
Giant Squid
I saw a giant squid and it was in a blob of glass. It was creepy because one eye was open and one eye was closed. The other thing that looked Creepy was all that you was white because the eye was looking up. C-r-r-r-r-r-r-e-e-e-p-p-p-y.
Squirrels
I heard the squeals squeaking away in the tree. I got to feed them bare handed and it tickled and I felt weird. Then my mum and my three sisters fed the squirrel. They even said it tickled.
Museum
I was in the museum and I saw some awesome stuff like these games where you had to catch the squid and fish. It was funny because my sisters kept on trying and they failed. I nevered failed. They said let me try one more time I said ok and they failed again. So we moved on and we saw this shop called Smiggle. I got a necklace ,It was an owl and I got an owl ring.
Statues
I saw statues of warriors. They had bits of red on them. It said do not touch. Then we went to the next bit. There was a warrior that was holding a creamy corn can and there was flies all around it. There was corn falling out of the can.
Jellyfish
The jellyfish was in a tank and they were eating. I saw the mum sting the baby accidentally. She thought it was the food. Then the baby swam away, the mum followed and the baby swam faster and faster and finally the mum stopped following.
This is my special place Te papa museum in wellington.
Well done Ruby!!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have put in how you felt it really brings the story to life!
Maybe you could add some more smiles e.g I was As cold as ice
-Dannii
I liked how you described the squid in how it was like a blob
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